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IMA Associates Newsletter
June 2006


What Writing Rules Challenge You?

Do you have one or two writing rules that you always seem to forget? As a result, you get stuck on a word, sentence, or punctuation mark. Right? Everyone does, even the most experienced and successful writers.

So what do you do?

If you’re like most people, including me, you either look up the answer or just find a different way to write the sentence. That’s perfectly fine. Why not devise strategies that make writing easier without compromising your effectiveness?

Today, I will address one of the most frequent questions people ask me in my writing workshops, “When do I use a semicolon?” Semicolons seem to generate a certain degree of anxiety among writers, so let’s see if we can alleviate some of that.

When Do I Use a Semicolon?

The table below describes four rules for using semicolons, followed by two examples. The first example illustrates the rule; the second example shows how to write the sentence without a semicolon—an option you may want to consider occasionally.


Use a semicolon
Example with a Semicolon
Example without a Semicolon
1) Between two closely related independent clauses that could also stand alone as separate sentences. Kelly goes to the beach to swim; Steve likes to build sandcastles with his kids. Kelly goes to the beach to swim. Steve likes to build sandcastles with his kids.
2) Instead of a comma between two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so) if the clauses already have commas in them. Although she was the last speaker, Selma captured the audience’s attention; and she received a standing ovation. Although she was the last speaker, Selma captured the audience’s attention, and she received a standing ovation.
3) To separate items in a series when one or more of the items has a comma. The president invited four executives to join him at the conference: Pete Ames, director of marketing; Nancy Chiang, director of human resources; and Juan Garcia, director of operations. The president invited four executives to join him at the conference: Pete Ames (director of marketing), Nancy Chiang (director of human resources), and Juan Garcia, (director of operations).
4) Before a transition word or phrase (however, for example, consequently, then) connecting two independent clauses. Mel is running faster since he started training with the coach; for example, he beat his personal best in the hurdles by 2.3 seconds. Mel is running faster since he started training with the coach. For example, he beat his personal best in the hurdles by 2.3 seconds.


Can you get through life without ever using a semicolon? You may. In fact, some writing experts recommend using semicolons sparingly to avoid writing long, complex, and confusing sentences. As with any other tool, aim for striking a balance, and try using semicolons to make your sentences as clear as possible for your readers.

Send Your Writing Challenges or Questions

I invite you to send your writing challenges or questions, and I will either address them in a newsletter or respond to you privately. You may be surprised at how many people struggle with the same issues.

If You Don’t Have Time to Attend a Class

If attending a writing class doesn’t fit into your schedule, or if you prefer a program that focuses on your individual needs, please contact me to discuss the option of one-on-one coaching.


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Ilana G. Traverse, Principal

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